Comic 1 - Messy

18th May 2017
Messy
Average Rating: 2.5 (2 votes)
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Serra Britt 18th May 2017, 2:35 PM edit delete
Serra Britt
Oh no! What's happening? What's going on?

Welcome to the teaser comic I put up before the comic was released. I drew this to start and was originally just going to be the first page I posted...but I admit I got a little antsy and impatient and decided to post it up a little early so some visitors could take a look XD

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Rule Buster Breaker, all characters and all aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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siegelpeapod2 22nd May 2017, 1:40 PM edit delete reply
Not sure if you do it or not,but its going to help a lot if you sketch out each panel, then go over it, and, when doing a head, start with a circle. If you cant do a good one yourself just use the circle tool or if there isnt one copy a picture of a circle in.
Serra Britt 22nd May 2017, 2:13 PM edit delete reply
Serra Britt
I do sketch out the panels now. Hopefully you will see the improvement as I go on. Thanks for the feedback! :)
siegelpeapod2 23rd May 2017, 7:52 AM edit delete reply
One other question, when you draw do you do it with a mouse or tablet?
Serra Britt 23rd May 2017, 2:08 PM edit delete reply
Serra Britt
Tablet. I'm not the best when it comes to drawing straight lines with it, but that has improved quite a lot as well while drawing the backlog.
siegelpeapod2 24th May 2017, 12:30 PM edit delete reply
Download lazy nezumi pro. I personally set the smooth type to massive. It's a godsend to me.
Serra Britt 24th May 2017, 2:08 PM edit delete reply
Serra Britt
Since drawing this page, I have started using vector art so I've been fixing that as I go. Hope you'll see the improvements on upcoming pages!
Drew 23rd May 2017, 4:08 PM edit delete reply
You have a lot of potential but here's a few tips: side-ways heads should be less flat, front-facing heads need more of a chin, and the left (from our point of view) arm of the person in the red shirt in the second panel should be longer with a more predominant elbow.
Serra Britt 23rd May 2017, 4:11 PM edit delete reply
Serra Britt
Thanks for the feedback. I definitely agree. In the sense that my art can definitely improve. I hope you'll enjoy seeing that improvement as well :)
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